Looks like a Ngahere reserve.
Smells like dense bush matter.
Tastes like the refreshing water on our lips.
Feels like crowded by bird and bush
I am the mighty kiwi and I live in Zealandia
By Charlie Denton We were learning about our camp to wellington and how to write poetry.
- I found it easy to put it on my blog
- I found it hard to think of an idea
- I really enjoyed the challenge of thinking of the idea
- Next time I need to be quick
- My Blog Post shows I am Stepping Up
Kia Ora Charlie
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you put this poem together with your ideas even though you said it was challenging for you. Good on you for persevering.
Remember to use ctrl+shift+v when pasting text like your reflections. Maybe you could go back in and un-format the text. I can show you how when I am in class soon.
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie