Thursday, 1 November 2018

Imagine a night



Imagine a night when you slip off a cliff and the clouds carry you away.

Imagine a night when birds turn into fire breathing dragons.
                                                                                                                                              Imagine a night when little reptiles turn into dinosaurs.

Imagine a night when harmless tiny fish turn into bone crunching crocodiles.

Imagine a night when native water birds were knee deep in the middle, of a lake, munching on crocodiles.

Imagine a night when your getting dive bombed by dragons blowing fire balls at you.

3 comments:

  1. I really like your imaginative writing it is very unusual "and I like that"
    its got some gruesome content you sound like a hunter and its got good quality to it.

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  2. but you could work on capitals.

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  3. I really like your imaginative writing it was creative I enjoyed reading your posts I hope you can post more🐱

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